Sunday, December 14, 2014

The Joy Luck Club Essay


Prompt: Although much of the plot of each story revolves around men, The Joy Luck Club as a whole centers on the relationships between mothers and daughters. How would the book differ if the Chinese characters were fathers and sons instead?

In The Joy Luck Club there were many miscommunications between mothers and daughters. Many of the conflicts these women went through were because of the diversity between their cultures. The mother being Chinese and the daughter being American. I believe that this book would completely change if these characters would be based on men instead of women for 3 reasons. The reasons being that men have less conflict, they are less emotional, and finally they're a lot less influential than women. This leads me to explaining further on about the examples I listed previously.
The first reason as to why I think this book would change if the Chinese characters would be men is because men tend to have less conflict with others. We can see in the chapter called Rules of the Game when Waverly Jong gets overwhelmed by her mother's constant pressure for the game of chess. Waverly breaks in emotion one day with her mother and asks her why she has always tried to take credit for her success. This creates conflict between these characters because at the end of the day Waverly lost interest in something she once had passion for and all because of her mother's selfishness.
The second reason why the book would change if it revolved around men is because men are less emotional. They never really express what they are feeling and tend to not have emotional breakdowns. The chapter The Voice from the Wall portrays how Lena is confused from her mother's actions and state of mind. Ying-Ying, Lena’s mom, suffered from a loss of a baby. She would always cry and never say much and claim to see the future. This affected Lena’s life because she never really got to interact with her mother throughout her childhood. By this, a wall was created upon them causing diversity between them.
The last reason is that men are a lot less influential than women. After Suyan passed away, it was June’s call to take over her mother's legacy and fulfill her wish. June was influenced by her mother and her legacy to fly to China and find her long lost sisters and give them Suyan’s message. Men don’t usually influence other’s or have a sense of control over someone, which is why I think this would be different if it was a book based on Chinese men.
In conclusion, those were the 3 examples why I thought this book would be different if it focused on Chinese men. I thought this book was very inspiring in the sense of how we should always be grateful of what and who we gave in our lives because one day they will all be gone. The book teaches us to always have a type of communication with our loved ones and if there are misunderstandings we should try to fix them. It’s better to solve a problem together than time passing by and not being able to say sorry.

Tuesday, December 9, 2014

Antigone Questions 9-15

9. Tom Leopard is called the Leopard Man because he is covered with a leopard tattoo and acts like one too. As described in paragraph #1.

10. The author thinks that people with tattoos and piercings are desperate for societies attention, and he finds himself unimpressed by them. He has these opinions because he thinks that when people try to attract in a positive form and have failed, they go for the more darker and negative way to attract others, otherwise known as attention.

11. The Leopard Man is different from other people with tattoos and piercings because he actually acts like a leopard. He lives in the wilderness and has no clothes.

12. The Leopard Man lives in a small cabin in the Scottish wilderness.

13. Society fears people who are loners because they pursue their own values without seeking others' permission.

14. Fey's argument in this paragraph is that even though weird people do have mental disorders, "normal" people have disorders too. For example, "normal" people suffer from alcoholism, eating disorders, depression, panic attacks, and other debating conditions.

15. Leopard Man is happy because he doesn't live up to anyones expectations, aka society.

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Diction Handouts

1. An example of low or informal diction is, "...I only climbed on the spare spar and leand over the rail as far as I could, to bring my eyes nearer to that mystery floating alongside."

2. Words & Definitions
-Opaque: not able to be seen through
-Elongated: unusually long in relation to its width.
-Phosphorescent: something glows with light without becoming hot to the touch
-Elusive: difficult to find, catch, or achieve.
-Immersed: dip or submerge in a liquid
-Cadaverous: resembling a corpse in being very pale, thin, or bony
-Ghastly: causing great horror or fear; frightful or macabre

Paraphrasing the paragraph:

The side of the ship made a hazy belt of shadow on the darkling glassy shimmer of the sea. I saw at once something extended and pale floating very close to the ladder. Before i could form a guess a faint flash of shimmering light, which seemed to issue suddenly from the naked body of a man, flickered in the sleeping water with the intangible, silent play of summer lighting in a night sky. With a gasp I saw revealed to my stare a pair of feet, the long legs, a broad livid back shot right up to my neck in a greenish cadaverous glow. As he hung by the ladder, like a resting swimmer, the sea lighting played about his limbs at every stir, and he appeared in it terrible, silvery, fishlike.

3. The elevated language contributes to the tone to make it sound more formal and more mysterious. Paraphrasing the passage affects the tone in a casual way. It sounds less formal and when reading the passage, it's not as intriguing as reading elevated words since it makes it sound better.

4. 4 examples of concrete diction in the passage are:
- phosphorescent light
-opaque belt of shadow
- a board livid back immersed right up to the neck in a greenish cadaverous glow.
- a headless corpse

5. The author chose to leave the captain, the ship, and the crew nameless in the story because he wanted the readers to still keep thinking and being in a way clueless as to who was being described. The elevated words are the ones which unveil what the objects are and how they look like.

6. The denotative meaning of the title The Secret Sharer is of a person who talks about their side that other people don't see, which is dark.


Word
Denotation
Connotation
Cadaverous
resembling a corpse in being very pale, thin, or bony
Body
Darkling
of or relating to growing darkness.
Darkness
Pale
light in color or having little color.
White
Phosphorescence
something glows with light without becoming hot to the touch
Flashy
Ghastly
causing great horror or fear; frightful or macabre
Scared
Headless
having no head
No mind
Fishlike
a characteristic of a fish
Feature